Moonlight
Moonlight shining in the stars,
Oh so far away,
Tucked so tightly behind sky bars,
Doomed there to stay.
Frozen fingers reaching high,
Wrenching at those bars,
Reaching with an absent mind in the sky,
But it's up too far,
Tiny sun rays rise from behind a hill,
Stretching and yawning,
Taking over night that was so still,
In the mornings dawning,
The Moonlight fades away inside it's cave,
Fading to a tiny light,
It would never forgive or had never forgave,
Waiting there till night.
By Eden Penfold
Week 7
16 years ago
4 comments:
Hi Eden
Nice poem iso wish i could write poems like you!
From your friend Laura
P.S Can you teach me to write poems like that.
just kinding!!
Hi Eden
I like the way you have used metaphors to create binary opposites to paint a picture of the coldness and darkness of the night and the warmth and light of the morning.
Fantastic use of these poetry tools make this a very memorable poem. One that I enjoyed reading several times and each time I did I found something new to wonder at.
Mrs H
Hi Eden,
WOW that entry was awesome how do you find the words and put them together to make a rhyme? I wish I could rhyme like that it wuld sure come in handy!
see ya,
LUCY
that was so creative and I'm so sorry I't took thislong to get on a computer.
see ya for today.
cacilda.
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